One glorious day there was a beautiful white bunny.
She was walking by the stream and then fell in.
She could not swim. She was squealing for her ideal
life. Then a kindhearted lion came upon her then
helped her up. They decided to use animal
language and said thanks.
The end!
I really like your quick write!There was dramatic problem in your story and a clear happy solution at the end. Well done.🙂
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