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Monday, 6 September 2021

Zoo Persuasive Writing By Drevyn

The Zoo Debate 

I am against zoos because animals need to live their life to the fullest like us humans. That is why I am against zoos. They should stay in the wild like how we stay in our homes. They should be in the jungle being free. My teacher told the class that when he and his son went to the zoo he saw the flamingos trying to fly free but they had know wings. I think that the zoo keeper did it so they can’t leave the zoo. That is sad. I feel sorry for the zoo animals.

Animals should be in the wild because in the zoo they can be lonely because they could have taken the baby or the mum or dad. They can be really lonely, which is sad for the animals. Some of the animals can not have that much space because there can be so many animals in one like birds in cages they can get older and then they can get really smashed and can probably die in the cage with no air and can not breath properly and that is sad when they die.

Zoos should not be allowed because you can go online to look at animals because sometimes you can not pat them and you are just wasting money and if you do not have a phone you can watch it on the tv.  You can learn more by going to the library and reading a lot of books about animals.You can learn as much as just going to the zoo.Animals can get bored because they probably have to get ready everyday and that is kinda boring like every morning yeah that will be really boring. 

Zoos should not be here because some zoos just like to get big animals like tigers and elephants and like lions but some do not like to get small animals like mia cat and spider monkeys and little animals like that is really sad. I feel sorry for them.

By Drevyn 

Tuesday, 31 August 2021

Feel Like You Belong

 Everyone is different because..

We look different

We sound different

We were raised different 

We have different Identity's 

We are connected to the community by..

Volunteering

Meeting new people

Exploring

Socialising 

By Brooke Y5



Monday, 21 June 2021

The chewed up pencil.

The chewed up pencil

The pencil was cheap looking, it had scratches that looked like it was from wild cats.

It's saving grace was that it was sharp, very sharp.

Sharp enough to pierce through a coat and stab a human.

I usually pretended that my pencil was like a dark red lightsaber

used in the movie star wars.

Teeth marks at the top from someone that had teeth sharp like a shark

made it look like it got scratched from Aquaman's pitchfork .

The long munched up pencil is now in my secret safe that nobody will use. 

It  is my special pencil that I will keep even when I am a grandpa.

My chewed up pencil can still draw and sketch and does the trick.   

by: Malmar Year 5


Monday, 1 June 2020

Umu Experience

Thank you to Mr and Mrs Faalili for the culturally enriching umu experience.

Tuesday, 27 February 2018

A moment in Time


I heard cicadas outside making croaking sounds. I heard kids having fun climbing trees.  I saw people climbing up big trees and little trees. I felt the fresh wind in the air.  I felt happy because I got to climb trees with all my friends.  I wondered about the big tree and climbing all the way to the top. I imagined the little tree was a big tree and climbing to the top.  I imagined falling but nothing happening to me. 



 By Makisha R8